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雅思作文结构语言深度分析,别再说你不懂雅思写作了!

2020-10-14 来源:wendusu 分享:
今天和大家一起来分析一篇雅思范文,话不多说,我们一起看看题目:

 今天和大家一起来分析一篇雅思范文,话不多说,我们一起看看题目:

 

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that as the part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

 

01

雅思作文的评分标准

 

 

首先,大家都知道雅思作文的评分标准有如下4条:

 

任务完成Task achievement

 

连贯与衔接Coherence和Cohesion

 

词汇丰富程度Lexical resource

 

语法多样性及准确性Grammatical range and accuracy

 

英语作文都有四个层级:

 

第一层,单词词组层

 

第二层,句子层

 

第三层,段落层

 

第四层,整体文章层

 

所以每个层次都应该为下一个层次服务:

 

1. 写句子时注意长短结合,富有节奏

 

2. 重要的逻辑变化,准确使用连接词

 

3. 适当的重复关键信息,但千万别用过头

 

4. 从观点到结尾,每一段的句子都要紧密关联

 

 

02

文章分析

 

 

Language learning is a large part of modern education curricular. Many believe to learn a language well, pupils need to reside in the foreign land, and to be immersed in the culture. This argument has strong merits, though, I question how well does one want to learn the target language, and also, what exactly for? This essay will highlight the educational aims, a student’s age as well as the length of time away overseas. 

 

生词解释

 

reside 居住;定居

 

The family now resides in southern France. 这家人现居住在法国南部。

 

首段给出了论文观点thesis statement:

This argument has strong merits, though, I question how well does one want to learn the target language, and also, what exactly for?

并且引出文章从哪些方面论证。

 

A second language needs regular practice, however, what is the learner hoping to achieve? Is the communication to be general or something more specific? At a high school level, a semester away will certainly improve the major skill sets, especially listening and speaking. Pronunciation will become more standard and idiomatic to a degree. I question if a semester, or two, would be a suitable length of time for advanced users, yet without a doubt, self-confidence levels would rise.

 

生词解释

 

idiomatic (语言)自然地道的

 

She was born in Italy but her English is fluent and idiomatic. 她出生在意大利,却讲一口流利地道的英语。

 

 

本段从不同需求,对于在国外的学习时间要求不同,进行了讨论。并且阐述了具体什么能力可以得到提高。

 

In recent years, the age of second language students has become lower. In many countries, a foreign tongue is taught at both kindergarten and primary school ages. Should a young boy or girl say 9 or 10 years of age, venture overseas for an extended period of time with the aim of becoming bi-lingual? As a group, possibly, though I firmly believe this age is too young. A long absence not only from family and friends but also familiar surroundings could be detrimental to emotional well-being and learning.

 

生词解释

 

venture 冒险去(或做);冒昧地说

 

She rarely ventured outside, except when she went to stock up on groceries. 她极少冒险外出,除非要去采购杂货。

 

句子分析:

A long absence not only from family and friends but also familiar surroundings could be detrimental to emotional well-being and learning.

句子主干:A long absence could be detrimental to emotional well-being and learning.

句子意思:长期离开家人、朋友和熟悉的环境,对于孩子的情感和学习都是有害的。

本段讲低年龄的学生不适合到国外学习语言,并且阐述了原因。

 

To conclude, living abroad for language acquisition is a great concept. This works well for more mature learners, however, there are drawbacks for younger students. To overcome such issues more class hours and contact with native speakers could be implemented.

最后结尾段总结,到国外居住习得第二语言是好的想法,但是仅限于成熟的语言学习者。

对于低龄学生,可以增加课堂学习时间和与英语为母语的人互动。

小伙伴们,你们是不是也有了创造的灵感,要不要也来小试牛刀呢?

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